Hello to all of you who read my blog. I've been reading a
lot of interesting philosophy lately (mostly David Benatar's 'Better Never to
Have Been') and have some pretty interesting blog posts/rants planned. BUT for
now I'd like to humour you with a side-project of mine:
I want to write a play.
I'm not a playwright.
I'm not a particularly good creative writer.
My knowledge of theatre doesn't extend past senior drama.
But I'm going to try and write this thing nonetheless.
Needless to say, if anyone has some sort of 'dummies guide'
or similar book that they'd like to lend me I'd be very appreciated. Initially
I had the pretty grandiose idea that I'd write it all, tell no-one about what I
was doing, and then one day just bung a big ol' manuscript on the table and say
with an air of nonchalance "Oh yeah, plays. I wrote one of those".
That'd be pretty cool.
But now I've decided it'd be better if I actually share the process
with some people. This has the benefit of:
a) Actually getting my ass motivated to write this thing,
and;
b) Giving people the opportunity to comment/ give feedback/
offer to help write this thing.
What I've got so far is essentially what
goes through my headwhen I've read far too much on trans-humanism, the abolitionist
movement and Aldous
Huxley's novel 'Island'. It's a sort of dystopian, futuristic, tragedy. I
guess if I can stay motivated to write this thing I'll post each new scene up
here on my blog. SO HERE'S WHAT I'VE GOT SO FAR. . . Comments and criticisms are both wanted and welcome.
THE WIRE-HEAD (Draft 1.0)
By Andrew Bloyce.
BACKGROUND:
Since the present day science has continued to develop
quickly. One of the new technologies allows humans to directly stimulate the
pleasure centres in their brains through the use of a small computer chip known
as a wirebot. Wireheads (people who wear wirebots) can manually control their
levels of happiness at will with no negative consequences; the pleasure they receive
is pure and non-diminishing. Despite the cheap financial cost of having such a
device installed not everyone is a wirehead. About half of the population have
serious problems with wirebots - These qualms finding origin in religious and
philosophical arguments. Hence the population is divided into the wireheads and
the 'real people' (as they like to call themselves). This division has become
so deeply ingrained into society that the wireheads and the 'true people' live
separate from one another, only coming together to make political decisions
that apply to the whole country. The 'true people' look upon the wireheads as
hedonistic, shallow, and even sinful creatures. The wireheads see the 'real
people' as misguided and look upon them with pity; they claim to have
discovered fulfilment and meaning in life.
The blissful state of the wireheads makes them easily
manipulated into doing the bidding of the 'real people'. Thus the 'real people'
have, over the period of a few decades, managed to confine the occupations of
the wireheads to what would generally be considered unpleasant jobs. The wireheads
perform manual labour, they work in factories and generally function as
servants to the 'real people'. Nevertheless the wireheads are blissfully
content in their positions due to the constant endorphin supply that they
experience. The 'real people' are reliant upon the wireheads to manufacture the
goods that the they consume. The 'real people' are, like much of the current
western world, slaves to consumerist culture. For this reason the 'real people'
fund the surgeries required to install the 'wirebots' into the brains of
willing volunteers. The expertise required to create the 'wirebots' can only be
found in the 'real people' - long term 'wirehead-ing' impairs intelligence - so
the 'real people' have a monopoly on the production of the 'wirebots'. They ‘real
people’ treat the wireheads as simply a 'means to an end' - The 'end' being the
production of goods.
The wireheads are slaves to the pleasure producing devices that the 'real people' provide them and the 'real people' are slaves to the tangible goods that only a workforce of productive, blissful, wireheads can produce. Thus, even though both ways of life are strikingly different, both are reliant on one-another for their wellbeing.
The wireheads are slaves to the pleasure producing devices that the 'real people' provide them and the 'real people' are slaves to the tangible goods that only a workforce of productive, blissful, wireheads can produce. Thus, even though both ways of life are strikingly different, both are reliant on one-another for their wellbeing.
MAIN CHARACTERS:
Samantha Davidson (Referred to as 'Sam'):
Sam is a student in her final year of schooling. Sam is a 'real
person' and attends one of the schools exclusively for 'real people' like her. Sam
is a highly inquisitive, sometimes arrogant teenager who has problems accepting
authority. Nevertheless she is highly intelligent. She is attractive and
confident. Sam is the daughter of Davidson and falls in love with the wirehead
Alexandra.
Alexandra: (or Alex)
Alexandra is a wirehead. She is 20 years old and lives in a
wirehead commune. Alex has plans to run for leader of the 'wirehead alliance'
in the near future and is, with the help of her family, planning her campaign.
Alex wants wirebot technology to be adopted by everybody and frequently
expresses her confusion at the 'real people' for avoiding it.
Davidson:
Davidson is the leader of the 'Real People Party' (RPP) and
is the current Prime Minister. He is also the devoted and protective father of
Samantha Davidson. Davidson is well-spoken and persuasive and seeks to find
ways to further use 'wireheading' technology to benefit the 'Real People'.
Davidson is well-intentioned but narrow-minded. He is the product of over a
century of capitalist, consumerist society. He, like many others, determines
his self worth through his social standing and the amount of desirable goods
that he possesses. Davidson wears overtly branded clothing and always arrives
at public events by limousine. The 'real people' admire Davidson very much. Despite
this, however, Davidson yearns for more and more material possessions and
admits that he won't be truly happy until he has a theme park built in his
honour (a lifelong goal of his).
Mr Grey:
My grey is a teacher at Sam's school. He is the professor in
modern history but has an uncommon interest in philosophy that makes others
view him as eccentric and outdated. Mr Grey is one of the few 'Real People'
that does not support the dominance of the 'Real People' over the wireheads. Mr
Grey has a profound influence upon Sam's outlook on the world. Mr Grey also
doubles as the Narrator in certain scenes.
Laura and Ron:
Laura and Ron and the joint leaders of the 'wirehead
alliance' and are both wireheads themselves. They are a married couple. They
stand in opposition to Davidson. They loosely resemble hippies.
Senior Scientist:
The senior scientist is a 'real person' and is the leading designer
of 'wirebot' technology at a company called 'Wire-Tec'. He/She receives his
orders from Davidson. The Senior Scientist is introverted and is intimidated by
Davidson. He/She is a perfectionist with a great deal of knowledge about human
neurology and robotics.
MINOR ROLES:
Mrs Davidson: Davidson's wife. A proud 'real person' like
her husband Davidson.
Alexandra's Family: This includes a mother, father, and
brother.
Assorted wireheads
Assorted 'real people'
Assorted Scientists
PLOT SUMMARY:
Sam, a 'real person', finds herself yearning to learn more
about the wireheads after having her interest sparked by a passionate lecture
from her history professor Mr Grey. She admits to Mr Grey that she would like
to try and meet some wireheads and Mr Grey is supportive of her. Because of the
taboo that surrounds non-professional relationships between 'real people' and
wireheads they do not tell anybody about their plans to interact with the
wireheads. They arrange a time and place to infiltrate the wirehead camp in
secret.
Meanwhile Davidson is busy working with the Senior Scientist
trying to develop new wirehead technologies that will increase the efficiency
of the current workforce. The scientists are worried any attempts to alter the
current wirebot design would risk causing the wireheads irreversable brain
damage and spontaneous death. Davidson is impervious to these concerns and
implores the scientists to continue with the research project nonetheless.
Due to the harsh penalties that can be enforced if a 'real
person' is caught associating with a wirehead Mr Grey and Sam decide that they
should try and disguise themselves as wireheads before entering the wireheads'
commune. The wireheads are unconcerned with fashion and dress only for comfort.
The most common item of clothing is a large loosely fitting dress that is worn
by both men and women, although many wireheads are nudists too. Mr Grey
volunteers to keep watch for police officials while Sam explores the commune in
disguise.
Inside the commune everybody is blissfully happy and Sam's
arrival goes unnoticed. Some people are talking and eating, others are dancing
and singing, and some are simply lying on the grass. A group of wireheads are
in a choir performing to the locals. Their song has no words - only long
sustained major chords with the occasional triumphant suspended fourth chord
resolving to the tonic. Both the singers and their audience are at the pinnacle
of human ecstasy. Homosexuality and polyamory and common in the commune and
sexual acts are often practised in public spaces.
Sam explores the camp and meets Alex, a wirebot of similar
age who is furiously scrawling notes on a piece of paper. They talk and Alex
explains that she is planning to run for leader of the 'wirehead alliance'.
When asked about herself Sam desperately tries to weave an elaborate and
intricate back-story but her lies are easily detected by Alex. Alex, however,
feigns belief in Sam's story in order to learn more about her. They find themselves
becoming increasingly interested in one another and when Sam goes to leave Alex
hints that she knows that Sam is an imposter; nevertheless, she asks her to
visit again anyway.
Alex returns to Mr Grey and admits to him that she has
developed a sudden infatuation for the wirehead Alex.
The Senior Scientist and their team discover a method a to
increase the effectiveness of the wirebots; this technology allows for an
unprecedented level of bliss and in test subjects has shown to increase
compliance to orders by 150%. The scientists proudly demonstrate the device to
Davidson in the laboratory. The test subjects are so deliriously happy that
they often laugh uncontrollably, but they are also indeed very efficient in completing
tasks, handling even the most demanding physical labour with joy. The
scientists warn that the device might cause a slow degradation of the users’
mental capacity but is otherwise completely safe. Davidson expresses a brief
concern that the testing phase has been long enough to ensure that it is safe.
The scientists assure him that the testing phase has been perfectly adequate.
Davidson is delighted, promises them all pay rises, and vows to implement the
new headsets as soon as he can.
Davidson goes home and shares the good news with Alex and
the rest of his family. He explains the new headset and its side-effects to his
family who, excepting Sam, congratulate him heartily. Davidson, in his joy,
can't help but proclaim how triumphant the 'real people' are in their clever
domination of the wireheads. He delivers a small monologue about how a life
well-lived is more than the merely chasing the simple pleasures that the
wireheads pursue. A life well lived, according to Davidson, is a noble life; a
life in which one is rewarded for hard work and virtue. He soon becomes
distracted again and excitedly fantasises about the things that he will buy
with the money he expects to make from this discovery. He proclaims that he
will begin the construction of the Davidson FunPark next week.
Sam decides to go and visit Alex again to tell her about the
new headsets. When she arrives at the commune the wireheads are gathered around
a large stage, on which two nondescript figures (one male, one female) are
addressing the crowd. Sam recognises these people as the leaders of the
Wirehead Alliance. The leaders passionately conduct a loud chant about the
superiority of their people. Sam lingers towards the back of the crowd
listening as the rally progresses. The leaders assert that they have found true
fulfilment while their supposed superiors are slaves to their desires for
material goods - slaves to market capitalism. The leaders explain that the
'real people' are infected with an arrogant belief that they are better than
the beasts of the earth and it is this false supposition leads them to be
unjustifiably disgusted by the open pursuit of pleasure. Their speech is
philosophical in nature and posits that the 'real people' actually want the
happiness that the wireheads possess but are too self-righteous to realise it.
The crowd listens and sways to the tone of their voices as if they are in a
hypnotic trance.
After the rally the crowd disperses and Sam manages to find Alex.
Sam blurts out that she is a fake, a ‘real-person’ masquerading as a wirehead.
Sam is unmoved by this information and says that she suspected it all along and
and has wondered what it would be like to meet a ‘real person’ anyway. They
talk about the separation of the people (wirehead/’real people’), about
history, and about each other. They form a close and personal bond. Sam asks
whether of not the commune have received a delivery of new replacement
wirebots. Alex nods but says that they have not started using them yet. ‘There
will be an official testing at the next rally’ says Alex. Alex tells Sam that
every time a new wirebot is unveiled they all simultaneously test it out by
turning the device up to it’s maximum setting. Wireheads look forward to these
celebrations because they unlock new levels of human pleasure previously
unimaginable.
Alex urges that everything that Sam heard in the rally is true – The wireheads are experiencing happier and better lives than the ‘real people’. Alex tries to convince Sam to trial one of the wirebot headsets on herself. Sam is apprehensive and worries that her family, particularly her father Davidson, will find out and resent her. Alex, however, is very persuasive and finally Sam submits. They both attach wirebots and turn their devices up slowly – notch by notch. Each step reveals a more intense level of bliss at the cost of a diminishing sense of self. Sam and Alex find themselves passionately drawn to one another and without inhibitions. They become physically intimate on the grass in the commune.
Alex urges that everything that Sam heard in the rally is true – The wireheads are experiencing happier and better lives than the ‘real people’. Alex tries to convince Sam to trial one of the wirebot headsets on herself. Sam is apprehensive and worries that her family, particularly her father Davidson, will find out and resent her. Alex, however, is very persuasive and finally Sam submits. They both attach wirebots and turn their devices up slowly – notch by notch. Each step reveals a more intense level of bliss at the cost of a diminishing sense of self. Sam and Alex find themselves passionately drawn to one another and without inhibitions. They become physically intimate on the grass in the commune.
There is a brief period where everybody is happy. Sam and
Alex are experiencing the excitement and curiosity of young love; Davidson, the
scientists, and their families are experiencing the happiness they derive from
buying all the consumer goods they ever wanted, and the wireheads are
experiencing incalculable levels of bliss.
In the first week of the implementation of the new headsets
the entire wirehead population is, as planned, enormously efficient. Production
has tripled and Davidson and the scientists become immensely rich. The
scientists buy cars, boats, and other luxury items; Davidson buys the themepark
he always wanted.
After a week, however, wireheads start spontaneously ‘blissing-out’
and dying from the new wirebot technology. The death is painless - orgasmic -
almost desirable. Due to the sudden onset of this side-effect there is not enough
time to recall the devices and within 24hrs almost the entire wirehead
population is dead. (The risk of such devastating side-effects occurring was
not revealed in the initial experimental testing due to the short testing phase
– The testing phase was only 24 hrs
whereas the side-effects seem to occur promptly after 40hrs of wirebot use at
maximum strength). These deaths claim Alex and her family too.
Sam discovers that Alex
is dead and, in an attempt to overcome her profound grief uses the wirebot
device again. She is, however, too mentally unstable to control herself and
despite knowing that she would probably die she turns the device up to maximum
capacity and leaves it there. She has 40hrs left before she disappears
ecstatically into nothingness.
Meanwhile, having only ever experienced life with the help
of wirebot servants the ‘real people’ realise how dependant they are upon
others to help them live their lives. Some news reports describe the unfolding
of events as being a triumphant victory of the ‘real people’ over the depraved
wireheads while other sources predict mass famines and homelessness because the
production power of the world has suddenly stopped. There is mass hysteria
amongst the ‘real people’.
Davidson is now left in the stressful position of salvaging
the remains of the country but is understandably overwhelmed.
Davidson realises that he has achieved everything he had set
out to do in life. He finally has enough money to buy everything he wants, the
wireheads he despises are now gone, and he has the theme-park he always dreamed
of owning. Despite these facts he finds himself morbidly unhappy. He goes to
the themepark to try and cheer himself up. Davidson wanders around the desolate
and almost mockingly joyous environment of the theme-park talking to himself
out-loud in a personal and emotional final monologue. Unbeknownst to him his
daughter Sam is also wandering around the theme-park having had chosen this
location to spend her last 40hrs. They unexpectedly come across each other and
Davidson realises that his daughter is wearing a wirebot. He desperately tries
to turn the device off but it is too late – she is already doomed to die.Davidson collapses onto the ground wailing in an animalistic display of grief
whilst Sam watches on with an eerie indifference.
<LAST SCENE: Narrated by Mr Grey whilst Sam and Davidson
perform silently>
Sam wanders away briefly, and in her last moments of
consciousness returns to give Davidson a wirebot headset too. It is apparent
that Sam is suggesting that Davidson join her in the deathly bliss that is
imminent. She offers the device longingly, tempting Davidson to go easily.
Davidson pauses, looks at the headset and at Sam, and in a sudden and
deliberate movement drives a nearby glass bottle into his neck. The play ends
with the simultaneous cries of Sam and Davidson in the darkness: – Davidson
cries out in agony, Sam cries out in ecstasy.
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Sounds great! I look forward to reading more. - Storm
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